Isekai World VN

I quite enjoyed the little there was available in this. The story was somewhat acceptable enough to keep me entertained for the whole time. However, it's not without it's flaws. The grammar and composition itself could use some improvements, as well as maybe make some original characters next time. I don't hate the Isekai Quartet dynamic, but it just doesn't feel right. Anyway, those were my thoughts for now, looking forward to seeing more if there will be.

Honestly, I like the setting. The characters need A LOT more work(by making your own ones). The grammar and story need more work in general, the story moves way too fast and misses out on key-details(like what happend, how did this character know the peoples language, his power, how he knows the area) etc. Otherwise in a few years I'm sure you'll succeed in making novels. I've released 3 volumes of my novel 4 years ago on another website. It took patience. Don't rush, take your time. Good luck.

Very much a unique passion project. Many aspects could be improved upon. Find alpha and beta readers to make the plot flow better and grammar/spelling mistakes minimals. Next, is to commission an artist to make better sprites for your characters so that it wouldn't look as jarring or out of the place. Finally, maybe take into consideration an option to change the MC's gender, appearance and pronouns like they do in other modern visual novels?