A Golden Opportunity

This game could easily have been called A Golden Opportunity to watch ads. Its very easy to die in this game, in fact there is a certain amount of randomization to the choices to where a choice that works one time will fail the second time. This leads to death which leads to another Golden Opportunity to watch ads. The story itself isn't so bad and the ending makes sense. Where this story struggles is the sheer abundance of pitfalls that will be a another Golden Opportunity to watch ads.

Not ad supported, it's literally unplayable unless you pay for it unless you read 3 pages and then stop for 20 minutes. It doeesnt advertise its word count, or tell you about the 20 minute trap every 3 pages. Story might even have a chance to be good but more than likely it's too short to be worth a few dollars otherwise the information would be there and it would t be faking ad supported with the time gating.

Decent enough writing, shody art, but it's completely unacceptable to include ads, and 20 minute timeouts between chapters that are 4 pages long.